Lying Awake


It was past her bedtime but something kept her awake. She thought of that wonderful day when he had said that he loved her. She in return had confessed her love for him yesterday. Life was simpler when she woke up in the morning yesterday. She was madly in love and he was still alive.

Written for 55 Fiction at Write Tribe under the genre LOVE.



16 thoughts on “Lying Awake

    • Hmmm.. I guess so. Both are my favourite subjects to read and write about. πŸ™‚ Maybe I should write another 55Fiction about what happened to him under the genre mystery. πŸ™‚


  1. WOW, what a twist!!! This was brilliant and left me amazed and wondering why she did him in if she loved him so. Way to keep the reader guessing. I love this 55 fiction!! I have come to love writing it and reading it.


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